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一、低与环保
构思点?
囄中一个小男孩Q早已进入甜蜜的梦乡Q电(sh)视却依然在播放,q时候妈妈走q来帮他关了(jin)?sh)视Q还责备他ؓ(f)什么L忘记关电(sh)视。显?dng)直观看来Q这q图是在告诉我们要节U用c(din)但是,我们如果从更宏观Q更深层ơ的角度L考,q幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念Q低生zR所以本文旨在倡导一U低环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和结构可如下Q?
W一D:(x)描述囄;W二D:(x)列D现象Q分析媄(jing)?W三D:(x)措施Q展望未来?
思维拓展
环保话题Q例如节U能源、拼车、交通问题等囄都可以与低碳生活的理늛联系Q从低碳的角度入手展开写作?
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly?and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②?
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing?everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life??to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month?
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet? we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature?
佳作妙译
如上囄动地展示Q一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉Q电(sh)视还开着。这时候妈妈走q来帮他关了(jin)?sh)视Q责怪小男孩又忘?sh)(jin)关电(sh)视?
q种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多h?fn)惯于做什么事情都开着?sh)视Q实际上q不看。这U习(fn)惯会(x)D?sh)力和能源的费Q这?x)导致碳排放。这偏离?jin)流行的“低生zZ的理念。低生zL指,减少I其是二氧化的排放Q以保护环境Q实现可持箋(hu)发展。根据统计数据,如果我们每天把开?sh)视的时间减一时Q则每个月可以减?. 17千克的碳排放量?
作ؓ(f)对地球负责Q的管理者,我们必须在公众中推广q普?qing)低的生活方式Q从日常生活中的每个l节开始。我们必要改变?sh)Z(jin)获得短期的快速经发展,牺牲长期的环境健L(fng)做法Q{向发展绿色经、@环经以?qing)低经。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现C会(x)发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐?
名师点评
?is sleeping soundly: 熟睡Q也可以表达?A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这cd词的加入Q得描q更生动zLQ而不是单调的主谓宾?
?A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again?
该句dl构是:(x)A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television?
q个句型的含义是Q一件事情正在发?正在睡觉)Q突然发生了(jin)另一件事(妈妈来关?sh)??
“with the television on”:(x) with 引导的伴随结构,即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television?
“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”,q句是妈妈关?sh)视的伴随动作,一边关?sh)视Q一边责怪孩子忘记关?sh)视?
囄描述q句Q写得越_ֽ好Q这句是先入Z的句子,也是阅卷老师重点看的句子?
?are used to doing: ?fn)惯于做某事Q用短语表达,地道准确?
?to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:q是2005q真题阅M的原句,的文章里面的句型Q引用的标准C?
一般而言Q环保类话题Q都可以用这句话Q引出第三段的个论?
历年真题是一座巨大的宝库Q我们一定要充分利用QD一反三?
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