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上图表现的是在“尚方宝剑”严惩的威严下,一位从事商业較赂的荒而逃。不a而喻Q这q图反映的是当今一U比较猖獗的C会现象Q商业較赂。深层次来讲Q就是道德问题、责任问题。本文的内容和结构安排如下:
W一D:描述囄;W二D:从两个角度分析媄?分析动机;W三D:措施?
思维拓展
此类文章可以展开的角度有Q金pQ商业道德徏设、职业道德徏设,公^竞争。相似的囄比比皆是。请参考下图:
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高分范文
There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery. Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery? is trying his best to escape. What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking?
The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money. For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive?effect on the whole society. Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery?may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy. Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position. For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”, showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money. It is true that money is indispensable? but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way?
To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly? drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted. Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public. Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment?
佳作妙译
毫无疑问q幅漫画生动地描qCCC会一U负面的但是却十分猖獗的现象Q商业較赂。由于惧怕严厉的惩罚Q这个h背着一大堆贿赂用的p荒而逃。Oȝ寓意是十分现实ƈ发h深思的?
上图的寓意可以理解ؓ详细阐述了在金钱冲击下职业道L沦陷。一斚wQ商业較赂对全社会造成恶劣的、毁灭性的影响。首先在贿赂行ؓ中表现出的道L陷和人性弱点会破坏和污染职业道L氛围Q不良分子也会效ѝ其ơ,行較者将破坏公^竞争Q诚信经营的商h被置于不利地位。另一斚wQ商业較赂行为大多是被利益驱动的Q这说明q些人对金钱没有正确的态度。没有金q是万万不能的,但对待金钱,无疑需要取之有道,用之有度?
Zd栚w贿赂q种道d败坏的行为,应该采取严厉的惩|措施。另外,应该在公众中逐渐普及正确的金p。只有这P我们才能拥有公^、健全的C会环境?
名师点评
?money used as bribery: q去分词作定?定语从句?
写过d词做定语的步骤:
W一步:写成定语从句Qmoney which is used as bribery;
W二步:省略引导词“which”和be动词“is”变成money used as bribery?
q样Q一个定语从句就变成了过d词做定语?
?damaging and destructive: q义词叠用,押韵Q头?
?revealed in the action of bribery: q去分词作定语,修饰前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weaknessQ写法参考本文点评第?条?
?It is true that money is indispensable: It作Ş式主语,真正的主语是that从句?
?To eliminate the immoral behavior of? Z……。作目的状语?
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