考研英語滿分作文揭秘
This picture, which illustrates the importance of love and help between parents and children, consists of two drawings. The first drawing shows what a mother and a daughter were like 30 years ago. The second drawing , in contrast , shows what the mother and the daughter are like now. The mother was taking the daughter’s hand in the first drawing while the daughter is aiding the mother in the second.
第一段作者非常樸實的描寫了圖畫內容,沒有過難的詞匯;邏輯清晰:段落總分總,首句為主題句,二三句分述,最后一句總結。亮點還在于句型多變。首句一個簡單句添加插入結構,三句也同樣使用插入語,實現(xiàn)華麗變身。本篇文章由兩圖構成,使用的”in contrast”,”while”
同學們應該學習。
What is intended to show in the picture is clear: parents should help their children when the latter are young, and the children, when growing up, should take care of their parents who have by now grown old. This is what makes a family.
二段詳細闡釋圖畫含義:父母與子女之間應該相攜。值得學習的地方是要變換說法,避免單調重復。
Impacted by the change in lifestyles, China is witnessing some kind of disintegration or loosing of ties in family relationship。 Yet, the love between parents and children is not only eternal, but the basic component of a healthy society. Only upon the solid foundation of domestic well being can the skyscraper of social progress be built; but if that be loosening, the construction upon it, however towering and glorious, would fall inevitably into debris. Love your parents and love your children.
三段提出了自己的建議和評論。句型更加豐富多樣,不僅采用插入結構(最后一句),首句采用過去分詞,第三句采用only半倒裝句。
總之,滿分作文多能夠緊扣思想,行文邏輯非常清晰,表達地道,句型結構豐富多變。希望同學們認真學習此篇滿分檔作文,爭取在不久的考試中拔得頭籌,取得勝利!
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