2014年考研沖刺英語(yǔ)(二)小作文范文點(diǎn)評(píng)_跨考網(wǎng)

　　51.Directions:

　　Some international students are coming to your university. Write then an e-mail in the name of the Students' Union to

　　1) extend your welcome, and

　　2) provide some suggestions for their campus life here.

　　You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming”instead.

　　Do not write the address. (10 Points)

　　參考范文

　　Dear friends：

　　I am very glad to hear that you would come to our school. Firstly I will extend to you our warmest welcome as you are coming to our university.

　　Before you come here, I will try to make some useful suggestions for you. First of all, it is better to learn Chinese well as soon as possible. Perhaps it’s not easy to master a language in a short time, but it is very important in your daily life. Secondly, it is necessary to know some cultural differences between two countries. Otherwise, you will meet some unnecessary troubles.

　　At last, you should get to know the weather and prepare for the clothes in each season.

　　We are looking forward to seeing you soon and wish everything goes well.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)

　　首段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山表達(dá)了自己對(duì)對(duì)方的歡迎之情，明確表達(dá)了文章的主要意思和目的;接著根據(jù)題目要求，給對(duì)方提供了有關(guān)學(xué)校生活的建議。信的正文簡(jiǎn)明扼要，條理清楚。以First of all、Secondly、At last標(biāo)明順序，以使文章層次清分明、脈絡(luò)合理。(首先，盡快學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)，或許在很短的時(shí)間內(nèi)掌握一門(mén)語(yǔ)言很困難，但在你的日常生活中會(huì)很有作用。其次，要了解兩個(gè)國(guó)家之間的文化差異，否則你會(huì)遇到一些不必要的麻煩。最后，了解天氣情況，準(zhǔn)備好每個(gè)季節(jié)要穿得衣服。)

　　最后，結(jié)尾部分既沒(méi)有過(guò)分使用華麗辭藻，更沒(méi)有粗魯無(wú)禮，而是恰當(dāng)好處地表達(dá)期待之情，祝福對(duì)方一切順利。整個(gè)作文思路清晰，目標(biāo)明確，語(yǔ)氣恰當(dāng)。既注重了語(yǔ)言的正式和禮貌，遵循了書(shū)信的交際原則，而且把握了細(xì)節(jié)，提供了合情合理的建議。

　　二、語(yǔ)言表達(dá)

　　應(yīng)用文的實(shí)際用途決定了其語(yǔ)言應(yīng)該簡(jiǎn)潔明了，不求復(fù)雜多變或者辭藻華麗。用詞準(zhǔn)確是本范文取得高分的關(guān)鍵之一。如extend to you our warmest welcome(我們向你表示最熱烈的歡迎);make some useful suggestions(提出幾條有用的建議);in a short time(在很短的時(shí)間內(nèi));wish everything goes well(希望一切順利);meet some unnecessary troubles(遇到一些不必要的麻煩)。其次是文章中的語(yǔ)法用得十分準(zhǔn)確，幾乎沒(méi)有什么錯(cuò)誤。 I am very glad to hear that 中that引導(dǎo)了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。注意不要混淆It is better to do sth.和You’d better do sth.這兩個(gè)不同的句式結(jié)構(gòu)。此外，文中多次出現(xiàn)了It is+形容詞+to do不定式的結(jié)構(gòu)，該句型相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單，語(yǔ)言通俗易懂。

　　以上是從內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)兩個(gè)方面對(duì)此篇范文進(jìn)行了點(diǎn)評(píng)。希望同學(xué)們以此為鑒，能夠?qū)懗龈哔|(zhì)量的英語(yǔ)作文。

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