會計碩士精英保過學員英語作文批改服務實例_跨考網(wǎng)
Dear foreign students:
I am glad to introduce myself. My name is Li Ming. I am the monitor of the Accounting Class1.Our class are going to hold a celebration to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Day in the evening on that day.We are very happy to invite you to join us. I am sure you will have a wonderful night and unforgettable.
Then I have to tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Day. On that day, our family will buy many mooncakes to give each other to express themselves` wishes---to be together with their family. At night, a lot of people will qo out to watch the moon because the moon will become bigger and rounder than anytimes.In the past people ate mooncakes to commemorate a person---Chang E,the goddess of the moon.If you want to konw more about the story ,you must be quick to anticipate!
At last,when you come i suggest writing yout own name on a card and put it on yout clothes in order to make friends with each other.Secondly,you have to prepare a fork or a pair of chopsticks and a plate.We will give you a big surprise.Foreign students,you are far away from home.We hope you can come and will be the happiest family!
We are waiting for you!
老師批改:
老師批語:
總的來說,文章整體結構清晰,脈絡也比較清晰,值得肯定??偟脕碚f可以稱得上一篇比較好的文章。但是對于一篇小作文,文字略多,篇幅長自然小語法點錯誤會比較多。作為一篇第一次作文練習,已經(jīng)很不錯了。希望再接再厲爭取取得更大的進步 加油!!
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